ext_18104 ([identity profile] compassrose7577.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] soleilpirate 2008-08-17 02:37 am (UTC)

Love the basic premise!

Yes, where was everyone? The images of the dead all milling around like the Great Beyond waiting room is really intriguing... and maybe a bit more fitting.

It's also quite fitting that Jack would be quite reluctant to be anywhere near Elizabeth. Face it! Nothing good has ever come from being around her, as far as he's concerned. (Have to close one eye, and look at it from Jack's POV, but you get my meaning.)

A warm body would certainly be inviting, anything or anyone (except the one that killed you) that was alive after the Locker. It was a glaringly bright place, but nothing says it was a warm place. Jack's terrors and fears are quite understandable.

Besides, a good bit of smut on a Saturday night isn't all bad!

Anxious to see what's next!

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