Two drabbles

[soleilpirate]

Title: Ticklish Persuation
Author: Soleil Compeau
Fandom: Pirates of the Carribean
Pairing, Characters: Jack/Will
Ratiing: um...R maybe?
Summary: Will uses the best methods to convince his captain of his grand idea

Jack struggled desperately, trying to kick and claw his way free. It was no good. he cried in agonized yelps, arms bound tightly over his head. Jagged words dripped brokenly from his lips. "Please...no more! I can't...take it!" 

Will paused and glanced up at the man's red, tear streaked face. he waited long enough to let Jack catch his breath before continuing to stroke the tender exposed underarms. 
 
"Just admit it Jack," he coaxed with spidering tickles. Jack screamed and thrashed. "It would feel so good, I'm not completely inexperienced! I want to be on top for once!"

Title: Truth Revealed
Author: Soleil Compeau
Fandom: Pirates of the Carribean
Pairing, Characters: Jack and Will
Rating: PG
Summary: Will learns what really happened between Lizze and Jack
A/N: Set during AWE, jsut after they sail from the Locker but before flipping the Pearl.

"You stayed behind?" 

Jack twirled to stare at him. "Stayed? I was forced, I assure you. Not that I wouldn't have anyway. Couldn't leave my girl." Jack touched everything he could in the cabin, murmuring happiness and relief. 

Will reeled, comprehension crashing over him, struggling to understand. "She forced you to stay?" 

Jack sighed. Why was it always him that had to tell Will the truth about the people he held in such high esteem? "Killed with a kiss, William. Warm lips, cold steel round my wrist." His voice low and sad. "What do you think of your girl now?"

Comments

[captsparrow4evr.livejournal.com]

Ooh, that first one gives me very naughty ideas. Do you feel up to writing a sequel?:)

And that second one is both incredibly sad but it feels so very right. I could see that conversation taking place. Poor Will.

Very nice. Thanks for sharing.

[equilibrium44.livejournal.com]

Aw!, these two were dandy. The first one cute even if I am not a slash fan, the second so accurate. Not an excess word in sight. :)

[sharklady35.livejournal.com]

Aha! So, having not located a fic wherein Jack gets tickled, you've written your own! Way to go!

[mary684.livejournal.com]

So happy to see these posted, you knows I loves them. However, I think I did forget to tell you: "warm lips, cold steel" -- really like that. Nice job, girl!

[susan0609.livejournal.com]

I love that you address that Jack would have stayed aboard the Pearl if given a choice. I have always wondered about it myself.

Tickling Jack - Can I go next? LOL!

Good work, Soleil!

[compassrose7577.livejournal.com]

So gooooddd.... and yet sooooo bad!

Will might have to think of other tortures to get his own way. I get the feeling that Jack could be one of those passive aggressives, that never really comes out and says it, but always gets his way.

The second one: Now there's the moment of ephinany. Always has to tell the whelp everything! "Your precious is a killer." Not necessarily the words everyone is waiting for.
Anyone who knows a man of the sea, knows that Jack wasn't leaving his ship. It might be interesting for Lizzie to find out her efforts were wasted. She murdered a dead man.

Good stuff!!

[djarum99.livejournal.com]

Yay, you wrote drabbles! See?

Loved the tickling :-)

[ainsoph15.livejournal.com]

Yay! You have a ticklish Jack as well. I don't think Jack would break with any kind of physical torture... except tickling!

(btw if you were looking for a Tickled!Jack fic, I wrote one here: http://ainsoph15.livejournal.com/14246.html :D

Oh, I love the second one. Very true, how Jack is always the one to tell Will the truths he doesn't want to hear, about the people he loves most. It's small wonder Jack is often economical with the facts with Will, because telling him the truth invariably ends up with a Turner blade at his neck! Good stuff!

[kseenaa.livejournal.com]

Oh, now that was very good. I really liked the second one for some reason...

[kseenaa.livejournal.com]

That first one made me giggle with glee. And the last one was sad, but also very good. Who else, indeed?

[lady-di75.livejournal.com]

First was very cute -- my first J/W drabble, actually, and quite cute!

The second... poor Will. He wants so to believe everyone to be as noble as he.

"Killed with a kiss, William. Warm lips, cold steel round my wrist." His voice low and sad. "What do you think of your girl now?"

Cold steel, indeed.