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Title: Ticklish Persuation
Author: Soleil Compeau
Fandom: Pirates of the Carribean
Pairing, Characters: Jack/Will
Ratiing: um...R maybe?
Summary: Will uses the best methods to convince his captain of his grand idea

Jack struggled desperately, trying to kick and claw his way free. It was no good. he cried in agonized yelps, arms bound tightly over his head. Jagged words dripped brokenly from his lips. "Please...no more! I can't...take it!"

Will paused and glanced up at the man's red, tear streaked face. he waited long enough to let Jack catch his breath before continuing to stroke the tender exposed underarms.

"Just admit it Jack," he coaxed with spidering tickles. Jack screamed and thrashed. "It would feel so good, I'm not completely inexperienced! I want to be on top for once!"

Title: Truth Revealed
Author: Soleil Compeau
Fandom: Pirates of the Carribean
Pairing, Characters: Jack and Will
Rating: PG
Summary: Will learns what really happened between Lizze and Jack
A/N: Set during AWE, jsut after they sail from the Locker but before flipping the Pearl.

"You stayed behind?"

Jack twirled to stare at him. "Stayed? I was forced, I assure you. Not that I wouldn't have anyway. Couldn't leave my girl." Jack touched everything he could in the cabin, murmuring happiness and relief.

Will reeled, comprehension crashing over him, struggling to understand. "She forced you to stay?"

Jack sighed. Why was it always him that had to tell Will the truth about the people he held in such high esteem? "Killed with a kiss, William. Warm lips, cold steel round my wrist." His voice low and sad. "What do you think of your girl now?"

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Ooh, that first one gives me very naughty ideas. Do you feel up to writing a sequel?:)

And that second one is both incredibly sad but it feels so very right. I could see that conversation taking place. Poor Will.

Very nice. Thanks for sharing.

Yeah, I had naughty ideas writing first one! Dunno about a sequel, we shall see what my muse *JackcoughJack* says about it.

Second one...yeah. I mean, had to have been Jack who told Will what happened. Only two people knew, and Elizabeth sure wasn't telling Will!

Aw!, these two were dandy. The first one cute even if I am not a slash fan, the second so accurate. Not an excess word in sight. :)

Thanks! Glad I can appeal to a wider audience. Seriously, I just wanted Jack to get crazy tickled, and Will seemed keep no help. *g* And second one smacked me between the eyes while I was at work. I had to grab a notebook and start scribbing right away. Appreciate you reading!

OK, it's only now I see the insane sentence I wrote here. *rolls eyes* It's supposed to be "Will seemed keen to help." Lordy!

Aha! So, having not located a fic wherein Jack gets tickled, you've written your own! Way to go!

Yes! But I'm always up for more! Know of any? It's the giggle you see. I'm in love with his giggles. It also makes an appearance in the Will/Jack/Norrington threesome I've been stuck on for about a million years.

Thanks for commenting!

> But I'm always up for more! Know of any? <

Well, it occurs to me that this scenario of yours can stand more than one interpretation. So here's another version with less slash and more tickling:

Jack struggled helplessly, kicking and yanking his wrists fiercely. It was no use. He cried out repeatedly, arms bound tightly over his head, feet fastened in place. "Please... no more!” he pleaded. “I... can't... take it!"

Will paused, studying the pirate's desperate, tear-streaked face. He waited just long enough for Jack catch his breath, before he resumed stroking the tender exposed underarms. Jack shrieked, wiggling violently.

Will grinned with fiendish glee. "Just admit it, Jack," he coaxed, his fingertips deftly trailing over the squirming stomach, ribs, and throat. Noting that the soft skin around the naval was particularly responsive. “Four little words, and this shall end.”

Defeated, Jack finally gasped them out. “Elizabeth... likes... you... BEST!”

Will folded his hands a moment, tapping his chin thoughtfully while Jack panted with relief. It was short-lived.

“You know, I don’t think you said that with nearly enough conviction.” Will resumed his tickling persuasion, expanding the assault down the slim legs, to Jack’s sensitive arches. Totally unmoved as his captive howled, the lean body thrashing as far as the silken bonds would allow.

William had already decided, it was going to take a long while for Jack to get the words right...

Oh yeah, oh that's gooood! Love the silken bonds! Can't have Jack chafing his skin while he fights uselessly to get away. Oh, and his sensitive arches! *gasps* I love this, am I sick? lol It's just marvelous!

> I love this, am I sick? <

Naw, we just find appeal in the image of Jack being tickled silly.
I suppose there could be any number of motivations for somebody to do so.

Lots and lots of motivation. You know, this begs the question, what is Jack wearing during this session? Or rather, not wearing? *daydreams*

So happy to see these posted, you knows I loves them. However, I think I did forget to tell you: "warm lips, cold steel" -- really like that. Nice job, girl!

Sweetie, you're the reason these are posted! *blows kiss* And the contrast of that moment between Elizabeth and Jack...so tender and sexual, ending in misery and death. *shivers*

I love that you address that Jack would have stayed aboard the Pearl if given a choice. I have always wondered about it myself.

Tickling Jack - Can I go next? LOL!

Good work, Soleil!

Yes it really is the things that makes most sense. CotBP Jack would not abandon his baby to anything. After all, he DID leave her, and then came back. I believe it's the one moment in DMC that his compass pointed straight, as it did for those ten years as well. To the Pearl. And the way he's walking around touching her and looking lovingly at her, as Lizzie approaches him.....

As for tickles, have at it, my dear! I bet the bottoms of his feet are a real spot. Thanks for the comment!

So gooooddd.... and yet sooooo bad!

Will might have to think of other tortures to get his own way. I get the feeling that Jack could be one of those passive aggressives, that never really comes out and says it, but always gets his way.

The second one: Now there's the moment of ephinany. Always has to tell the whelp everything! "Your precious is a killer." Not necessarily the words everyone is waiting for.
Anyone who knows a man of the sea, knows that Jack wasn't leaving his ship. It might be interesting for Lizzie to find out her efforts were wasted. She murdered a dead man.

Good stuff!!

Mmm, well I'm pretty sure the tickling works! Jack can't exactly take it, not sure who could. lol

I'm sure Lizzie believed she was doing what she had to, at that point. Neither she nor Will found Jack very trustworthy at all, and seeing him row away can't have helped that even if he did return. I always thought it a shae that Jack was unable to open up more to his friends, it might have saved a lot of grief. But then, we wouldn't have the great angst to work with that we do!

Thanks for the read and comment!

Yay, you wrote drabbles! See?

Loved the tickling :-)

Yes I did! It was easier than I thought. lol I loved the tickling too! And I love you, for commenting. *kiss*

Yay! You have a ticklish Jack as well. I don't think Jack would break with any kind of physical torture... except tickling!

(btw if you were looking for a Tickled!Jack fic, I wrote one here: http://ainsoph15.livejournal.com/14246.html :D

Oh, I love the second one. Very true, how Jack is always the one to tell Will the truths he doesn't want to hear, about the people he loves most. It's small wonder Jack is often economical with the facts with Will, because telling him the truth invariably ends up with a Turner blade at his neck! Good stuff!

Yes, I adore ticklish Jack, it's just a precious idea! And it's the best way to get something out of someone without actually hurting them. Thanks for the link! *zooms over to read*

Second one just makes too much sense. Will is an idealistic, noble man, who sees everyone as being as pure as himself. Jack feels he really needs to see Elizabeth for the pirate she is. *g* So true about the Turner sword! Poor Jack. Thanks so much for reading and for commenting! I love it!

Oh, now that was very good. I really liked the second one for some reason...

Thanks darling! It just made too much sense. Glad you enjoyed!

That first one made me giggle with glee. And the last one was sad, but also very good. Who else, indeed?

Thanks! I really adore the idea of Jack struggling and giggling. Sadistic, ain't I? Second one....yeah, I am seriously convinced that conversation actually took place. Just off camera. :-)

First was very cute -- my first J/W drabble, actually, and quite cute!

The second... poor Will. He wants so to believe everyone to be as noble as he.

"Killed with a kiss, William. Warm lips, cold steel round my wrist." His voice low and sad. "What do you think of your girl now?"

Cold steel, indeed.

Thanks! I really, really appreciate the comment! Glad I could make J/W work for you, even in a drabble. Second one...ooooh yeah. how hard was it for Will to accept that his princess was a pirate at heart?

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